Friday, December 17, 2010

Invisible pain






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The visible stains of tears on my cheeks
dries away within few days or weeks
But the invisible pain that is piercing my heart
remains forever and it doesn't go apart



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An Ordinary Gal said...

ohh so true...dat wound will remain forever :(

Valli said...

Hmm...Some wounds never heal...Even with time..

Nandu said...

interesting

Valli said...

ThanQ Nandu

kiran said...

hmnnn.....should not worry much about the past..!!

but ur lines are very gud.. :)

Valli said...

ThanQ Kiran :)

Abhishek said...

akka chala baagundhi..
superb..emi anukokapothey oka line..

"a bit of caring to fill the pierce..
and there's a hope that the pain clears.."

Valli said...

Abhishek...Cool....Nice add :)

adreamygal said...

Painfully beautiful !Well, its true , some wounds can never heal with time , in fact words/time just deepen the scar !

Valli said...

Hmm yeah..:)
ThanQ adreamygal :)

MangoMan said...

If it's fiction, it's painfully beautiful. Else, we have all gone through this phase at some time or the other. Take care. Being happy is not as difficult as it's made out to be.

Valli said...

ThanQ Mangoman..:)
YEah we all go through this :)

Short Poems said...

Beautifully written, liked your lovely poetry and your beautiful blog!
Take care
Marinela x

Valli said...

ThanQ Marinela..:)

PRANEETH said...

Short and nice

Valli said...

ThanQ Praneeth

... Madhumathi ... said...

That's so true! :)

Valli said...

Thanks Madhu

 

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