Wednesday, October 06, 2010

Depression






(Image taken from here)

I feel so hollow
I feel I am just nothing
I am getting drenched in this deep sorrow
And in my heart, I can feel my pains sing

I feel so worthless
I feel I am cursed
My mind is filled with blankness
As my map to fulfill my dreams is being crushed

I feel so lost
I feel that I am not secure
My mind is filled with haunting voices
That are making my ideas unsure

I feel so depressed
I feel very dejected
My feelings cant be expressed
With the fear of being rejected

I feel so lonely
I can feel only my presence
I talk to my inner self deeply
As nobody else could understand my silence 



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Cutie Pie (♥‿♥) said...

Nyc vallz...but write smething other than solitude someday :)

winds of time said...

Depression is Killing :(

nice lines.. :)

Smiley! said...

Yet again .. Guud one !

╰» Dimps ♥ said...

very sad .. but gud one :)

keerthanaTammana said...

its alwaz been ur MARK :) nice1 akka

Valli said...

Cutie....Even I'm hoping for the same..:)

winds of time...Yeah depression is killing...ThanQ :)

Smiley....ThanQ :)

Dimps.....ThanQ :)

Keerthana....ThanQ :)

Cherry said...

Nice One ;)

MoonShine said...

Nice Pictures..
Well Written

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kiran said...

ilanti sad poems inko sari rasthe nee blogger ninnu post cheyadaniki permission ivva kudadu... :P

bagundammai...kani...

Anonymous said...

Hey Siri,

Try "Power of Positive Thinking" by Vincent Peale. I just started reading from 1 week . I feel like I changed a bit. Hope it works for you too..

Note: Considering you are in Depressed Mood or lost somewhere ..

Takecare,
*M*

Valli said...

Cherry...ThanQ

Moonshine...ThanQ

Kiran...He he...try chesta...sad poems nunchi bayata padataniki...:D
ThanQ =]

Anonymous (Maruthi)..I'll try that..:)
ThanQ for your suggestion

Pari said...

wowwwwwwwwwwwwww yaar tum bhe kamal ho i love da way u express ur thoughts :P keep da gud work sweety

Vallz said...

Thanks for the read Pari..:)
Keep visiting..Happy Blogging

Abhishek said...

Awesome akka.. you remember me?

Abhishek said...

Awesome akka.. :D

☂☆ Vållῐ ★♬ said...

Yeah I remember you...Thanks for the read Abhishek :)

Piphi / Prateek Kunwar said...

I hope things are better now :)

Meenakshi Malhotra said...

I hope its not biographical...

sathish kumar said...

you echoed my mind Valli.... amazed

Anunoy Samanta said...

Well expressed friend... just see to the second stanza's rhyming, if it can be little improved :-)

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thechickenpuff said...

Its well written... lets try a chirpy new poem will you?

AmitAag said...

Very sad and profound!

namratakumari said...

How pathetic and hollow one feels when finds no one around who can understand his/her feelings, being within the crowd one feels lonely and worthless.....
I somewhere identify my grief in your pain. :(
A very nice creation...

The impertinent savage said...

the silent throbbing in these lines touched meeeee

TTT said...

Depression is a person's worst enemy ! b'ful lines ...

Panchali said...

awwww...touching poem but a lovely write up Valli celebrating the verve, the passion and the elevation that emotions bestow upon us...
Hope you feel better soon.
xoxo

 

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