Thursday, October 15, 2009

When I'm lonely, I enter into fantasy world.






(Photo by Little Heart Archu)

I am so lonely
I can feel only me
I sit in a room
filled with gloom
collecting memories of the past
that always last
I read my dairy taking out from the shelf
And I find myself
I am unique in my own way
I don't care what people say
I talk with God in my heart
Who never makes me feel apart
Amidst million people
I feel that I am the only one
Like a yellow petal in a red rose
Like a wave that passes away and goes
Like a black dot on a white paper
In a huge forest, Like a left alone deserted creeper
I live in my virtual world
filled with thoughts of gold
It is the world of lovely imagination in my heart I drew
Although it isn't real, I feel it is true
I feel it alluring and real
Although they are just virtual
Sometimes dreams are better than reality
So I love my world of fantasy
I am lost in those dreams
Where my thoughts are in extremes
I love and live in my fantasy world
Filled with thoughts and moments of gold
Those precious moments I always hold



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g said...

SuperB Lines....

Fantasy at ur lines too..

Keep Post something like this :)

-_-_-_-MaDhUmAtHi-_-_-_ said...

Valli .. akka.. sooperb poetry !! says evrything about loneliness.. :)

touching liness..

keep riting..!!

vineet said...

loneliness rox too..ask 1 who is nt havin it..stil cant take the credit frm u fr such a beautifl poem...keep writin

Himanshu Karki said...

really a lovely poem...


hope u like my blog
http://amazing-n-weirdworld.blogspot.com/

Valli said...

g

ThanQ=]

Madhu

Thanx re..

Vineet

ThanQ

Himanshu

Thanx

PRANEETH said...

Nijamaina feel tho rasinattu unnay...
every line seems to be ur own feelings...

Lucky to hear such line

Valli said...

Thanx Praneeth

Jyothi said...

Virtual world is what you said......
Thats the real world..... this is what I say....
When you just cant come out of it.... Remember it can never be virtual....

Go ahead.... forget everything... and enjoy your world....

Well..... thats what I do.....
Take care....

by the way ... I forgot saying "Hiii"......

Valli said...

Hie..
ThanQ Jyothi...:)

 

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